SPQR Blues 3 part I

Wednesday, 3 January 2007 08:54 pm
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Alexandrian WonderbraChapter III begins—here it is with its ink on. Perhaps I will decorate the walls more later.

Some news: Wowza—Recognition from the very fine website webcomicgeek. I don't just call it a fine website because it gives SPQR Blues the nod for Best Writing of the year. It's a fun site and a great way to discover some extremely cool webcomics. Uhm, I think I just called myself extremely cool. Just for today, I will indulge. Whee!

There's a comments section, if you feel like saying anything. Also: the top comic pick, I Am a Rocket Builder, is quite awesome, and somewhat interactive. I just spent way too much time clicking on the last panel of the one I linked to.



Chapter III: Family Business
Family resemblance

Date: 2007-01-04 03:02 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kyleen66.livejournal.com
Of COURSE you get best writing of the year? Whatever else would you get?

I think you have be best art too! Lookit felixancestorclone kissing on Justa's shoulder there? That's just HOT.

Oh, and I like the maid being the same maid in her daydream. ::nod nod::

This is all way too much fun for meeeee!!!!!

(looking forward to more great things from you in 2007!)

Kisssies!


Date: 2007-01-04 02:24 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] meritahut.livejournal.com
And here I thought it was just some innocent daydreamy smooching. I should have known you can't put ersatz-Antony and substitute-Cleopatra together and not generate some heat :P

Your icon is cracking me up. That innocently tilted head... makes me suspect the doggie is actually standing on a half-eaten pizza box, or a cat... :)

Date: 2007-01-04 03:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kyleen66.livejournal.com
Your icon is cracking me up. That innocently tilted head... makes me suspect the doggie is actually standing on a half-eaten pizza box, or a cat... :)

Shadow would be more likely to be hiding a pizza box. He likes the cats.

That was his portrait along with the ones I had done of Cookie and Al.

I put the caption in, because, he IS such a good boy! Everyone should know it. I was half tempted to use it in the that "other place" as my icon but figured it'd get me banned for using a "furry." LOL.

Date: 2007-01-04 03:43 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] xanath.livejournal.com
Congratulations. :D But I could have told them THAT. Well-deserved, amica!

And I just love this strip. I love Justa's daydream, from the shoulder-kiss ::shiver!:: to Justa's little upturned nose to her real-life hair. Wonderful!

--Kris

Date: 2007-01-04 02:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] meritahut.livejournal.com
I do believe I once described it as one of those "how do you breathe through something that small?" noses. Fortunately, she is petite and does not require large quantities of oxygen. By which I mean, thank you :)

And now I know, if the story ever sags, put in a shoulder-kiss >:D

Date: 2007-01-04 04:20 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] b2creative.livejournal.com
I have to admit, it took me a couple read-throughs to figure out what was going on here ...

But that could just be from general lack of sleep!

Date: 2007-01-04 02:14 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] meritahut.livejournal.com
Maybe the next row of panels will help put it in clearer context; though, of course, I'd like each day to stand on its own.

What caused the most confusion? The transition from imaginary to real? Not knowing where the "real" people are yet? Or the weirdness of suddenly starting out with the Queen of the Nile? Or... none of the above? :)

queen of the nile

Date: 2007-01-04 06:02 pm (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
It was a bit disorienting to suddenly drop in on Cleopatra... it was clearly cleo from the first frame... Thank you Ms Ms. E. Taylor, for clearing that up right away. So by the second frame I figured this was a historical flashback, but the Justa refferences brought me around pretty quick. It worked for me very well. Keep up the good work, Mighty Klio. DRW.

Re: queen of the nile

Date: 2007-01-04 06:14 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] meritahut.livejournal.com
I had to redraw Antony/Felix, who kept trying to look like Burton :)

Hmm. Maybe we'll have a real flashback to way-back-when some day. Or I can turn my failed novel manuscript set during those times into a comic... I tried that once but didn't get past the second page. Maybe, in my enormous amounts of available time, I will try again.

Date: 2007-01-04 10:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] b2creative.livejournal.com
Oh dear ... now I've got you obsessing about clarity ...

Seriously though, I was quite tired when I read it, so it's really no wonder I didn't get it the first time. It was a bit of a "okay, wait a minute, where are we now?" kind of feeling during the first few panels, then a "why is someone calling Cleo Justa?", then a "hold on, what's Justa doing in Cleo's entourage?", followed by "no, she's not really there, I think, maybe" and "hey, Cleo looks a lot like Justa with more eye makeup, and Antony looks a lot like Felix with more ego" and finally "oh, I get it, I think, maybe".

But as I said, you must take sleep deprivation into account.

Date: 2007-01-04 11:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] meritahut.livejournal.com
Ah, I see. As long as you were willing to stick with it :)

I like the idea of "Felix with more ego." Maybe Chapter III will be good for that ego of his.

Date: 2007-01-05 10:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] perilousknits.livejournal.com
I shouldn't try to read comics when I'm on Nyquil. When I saw the first frame, I thought, "Why does Cleopatra have blonde hair?" Then later, I thought, "When did Felix meet a Queen? Boy will she be mad that he got her name wrong!" Then I kept reading and it all made sense.

Date: 2007-01-06 12:57 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] meritahut.livejournal.com
These days I try to do everything in some sort of altered mental state. Extreme sleep deprivation is the current drug of choice.

Date: 2007-01-04 03:34 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kyleen66.livejournal.com
But that could just be from general lack of sleep!

Sleep is for the dead.

::nod nod::

Date: 2007-01-04 05:11 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amedia.livejournal.com
Wowza!

Congratulations on some very well-deserved recognition!!!!

(loved the new installment, too...)

Date: 2007-01-04 06:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] meritahut.livejournal.com
No elves, dragons, gamers, space aliens, college roommates, talking pets, or furries (unless you count the bear)... I'm always amazed anyone reads this thing at all :D Chapter III should have more, uhm, boozums--that will help increase readership, surely...

Date: 2007-01-04 08:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kyleen66.livejournal.com
::little voice::

but i like my elfies and dragons....

::sob::

(In all seriousness, you have WAY WAY more readers than I do. So that's a good thing! And that's with dragons. So you are doing something seriously right!)

boozums?

Date: 2007-01-04 09:23 pm (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
Yay, Boozums is good. I believe every woman should have two of them. Boozums is your friends in the wilderness. DRW.

Re: boozums?

Date: 2007-01-06 02:59 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amedia.livejournal.com
Boozums is good - *talking* boozums is even better!

Re: boozums?

Date: 2007-01-07 03:53 pm (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)


"Boozums is good - *talking* boozums is even better!"
Hmm, I must admit the only things boozums ever said to me was: slow down boy, quit grabbing, we're gonna be her all day. It was a relief to find out they were right. DRW.

Date: 2007-01-04 01:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberdulen.livejournal.com
Congratulations! Your writing IS excellent. :)

Date: 2007-01-04 06:25 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] meritahut.livejournal.com
Thankyew :)

I might not snag any awards for art unless I go full-colour, but this is unlikely to happen. I will remain a champion of b&w! Probably! :D

Date: 2007-01-04 07:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cyanocorax.livejournal.com
I can't imagine your writing with any other art, so I don't know why you didn't win for both. The occasional color is a treat, but I agree, stick with b&w. And I love the sudden transition to Justa's daydream. A little disorienting but high time to lighten up the mood a little!

Date: 2007-01-04 11:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] meritahut.livejournal.com
I don't think she'll be slipping off into any other daydreams, but I can't make any promises ;)

The comic webcomicgeek chose for best art, Unity Rising (http://www.rdcomicsonline.com/comics/comics-001.html), is interesting—a very free, loose line, and good use of layers of colour, and what I'd consider a step away from "typical" webcomic colour work. Well, I think there's such a thing as typical webcomic colour work.

Date: 2007-01-04 04:36 pm (UTC)

Date: 2007-01-04 06:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] meritahut.livejournal.com
:)

Scary 50s (?) clapping people. It's like getting the approval of an entourage of ghosts. The woman in the third row back whose head swings back and forth is bopping to her own beat. I like that.

Congrats!

Date: 2007-01-04 08:10 pm (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
Aww, Congrats on winning! =) The plot is really intriguing and I've been addicted ever since I saw your link. Keep it up!

Re: Congrats!

Date: 2007-01-04 11:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] meritahut.livejournal.com
Will do! The next installment might not be until tomorrow--I am suddenly overwhelmed with a work deadline. Wouldn't it be nice if drawing the comic could just be my job? :D

Date: 2007-01-04 08:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] passiveangel.livejournal.com
May I take your cropped picture and make it one of my icons? It's gorgeous!

Date: 2007-01-04 11:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] meritahut.livejournal.com
Sure! I'm hugely honoured :D

(More Whee!)

Date: 2007-01-05 06:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] passiveangel.livejournal.com
Woohoo! I may try to color when I have time, just for fun. :-P

PS -

Date: 2007-01-05 07:00 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] passiveangel.livejournal.com
Sorry, I forgot to give you much deserved kudos! Of course SPQR Blues gets the best writing of the year, none other can compare! ;-) And besides, didn't I tell you that yours is the first comic that I've been reading and following regularly for a long, long time? That is an achievement.

Re: PS -

Date: 2007-01-06 12:59 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] meritahut.livejournal.com
I'd better get on the ball and post a few updates this weekend, then :D

Date: 2007-01-06 12:58 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] meritahut.livejournal.com
Yay, a Roman colouring book! Sort of!

Date: 2007-01-05 04:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dr-phil-physics.livejournal.com
It's funny to think of Romans having daydreams -- but of course they did! And what would an educated Roman girl have daydreams about? Why only one of the great Roman love stories. I mean, I'm assuming the Romans thought it a pretty good doomed love story in their time -- just because Shakespeare wrote about it doesn't really count in the Roman book of the Hall of Fame of Love Stories. (grin)

Funny, I've never thought of the goddess being just a dream to Felix. Take that as a compliment to the fine writing!

As for the writing award -- Mega Conga Rats! It's nice to know that a little plot is not only good for the soul, but that it gets recognized, too.

Of course, they could just be responding to bears and camelopards. (double-grin)

Dr. Phil

Date: 2007-01-05 06:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] meritahut.livejournal.com
I'd say that she'd look at the story as a tale of intrigue, adventure in exotic lands, and the ultimate pragmatic (read: "Roman") sacrifice for family, featuring a frighteningly foreign but fascinatingly independent woman destroyed by love and romantic obsession (think: "Dido"), and a dashing but tragic man led astray... and oh-so-steamy, and right up there with the best stories out of the Trojan War, only this happened only a hundred years ago. Or... er... something like that. It's hard to fit all my opinions on a Roman girl's opinions into one sentence, but as you see, I am always willing to try :D I'll leave it to papa Petronius Stephanus to provide some alternative popular opinion on the Great Love Story, a few installments from now.

The goddess... is she real or is she Memorex? Who can say?

More bears in chapter III! But probably no camelopards! Maybe!

Date: 2007-01-06 04:31 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kaseido.livejournal.com
I'm here from a link on [livejournal.com profile] classics to the webcomicgeeks site -

I'm in love! This is the webcomic of my dreams!

And, I have to say, having come cold to today's strip? No problem following it, and I was totally charmed and hooked.

Congratulations on the award!

Date: 2007-01-06 01:55 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] meritahut.livejournal.com
Welcome! I'm glad to have you here :)

You should have the link to the ComicGenesis archive from webcomicgeek, but just in case: you can catch up on the whole story in sequence more easily on CG than on LJ: Chapter I (http://spqrblues.comicgenesis.com/d/20051120.html), Chapter II (http://spqrblues.comicgenesis.com/d/20060301.html).

And now, back to Chapter III... it's drawing those Flavian hairdos that's slowing me down... yes, that's it....

Date: 2007-01-06 11:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kaseido.livejournal.com
*g*

I stayed up late last night reading *everything* - I'm absolutely blown away (and addicted!).

SPQR Blues is absolutely the best historical fiction I've ever read (and I've read a good bit!). I love the characters, the storytelling style, the story - my only complaint is that I WANT A WHOLE LOT MORE RIGHT NOW!!!!

I'm completely in awe, and completely hooked!

Date: 2007-01-07 01:52 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] meritahut.livejournal.com
Oh my! ::blushblushblush:: Must draw even faster :)

I am literally surrounded by historical reference books and might soon make a project of re-reading some, to re-absorb whatever information has gotten buried in disused brain cells and cut off by broken neural connections. Massive info input is always inspiring. Plus I want to get the little details of ordinary life right, or at least plausible, in case any Classics professors challenge me to a duel :)

Date: 2007-01-07 02:16 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kaseido.livejournal.com
*g*

I was speculating on your Isis priestess - she looks *so* much like the Rider-Waite High Priestess that I dove into deep syncretism, going quickly to the Masons, Mozart's Queen of the Night, and of, course, it always comes round to the Templars! :p

Seriously, though, I am curious as to your source for her - I see hours of intellectual tail-chasing ahead!

And yeah, I hear a lot of Classics profs are pretty handy with a gladius! *g*

Date: 2007-01-07 03:21 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] meritahut.livejournal.com
Those Templars, always in everything!

Formula for priestess:

1) take an Egyptian woman
2) Hellenise
3) Romanise

There might be some residual Rider-Waite memories getting in the way. Alas, this explanation is not very intellectually exciting. I prefer your version!

Date: 2007-01-07 03:31 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kaseido.livejournal.com
LOL!

Of course, it didn't help that I read that as

a) Hollandaise...


Must be dinnertime!

Date: 2007-01-07 02:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] meritahut.livejournal.com
Don't forget to to (BAM!) kick it up with a little Parthian (the priestess) or garum (your meal).

Nah, maybe skip the garum.

Love the icon, btw. I know that's what I do when I'm leaning on a wall, bored with fluttering around....

Date: 2007-01-07 10:59 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kaseido.livejournal.com
*g*

A little Parthian sounds delightful - and I confess to long curiosity about garum... :P
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