I read all of chapter two in one afternoon. Time well spent! Awesome stuff.
You've got a real knack for picking out what parts of the story to leave in and what to leave out, balancing plot and story advancement with the needs of dialogue, wit, and drama. And I like how you compress and decompress time (in the gutters!) for the reader. Well done, well done indeed.
Thank you so much, both for reading through chapter two and for the kind feedback. When I started, I didn't quite realise how much of a challenge it would sometimes be to get the story across in a small number of panels. But I'm always glad to spend time in the gutters for my readers :)
I might not be able to maintain a daily schedule for chapter three, but I'll keep things moving along as fast as I can!
OMG I love the designs! Awesome Egyptian (Alexandrian, if you will, with heavy roman influence) dress! LOVE IT! Yay! Can't wait to see the final product!
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I should have the inking done for Chapter 3 part I at least by late tonight. In the meantime, if you want a spoiler, you can see the pencil sketch.
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Date: 2007-01-03 07:02 pm (UTC)You've got a real knack for picking out what parts of the story to leave in and what to leave out, balancing plot and story advancement with the needs of dialogue, wit, and drama. And I like how you compress and decompress time (in the gutters!) for the reader. Well done, well done indeed.
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Date: 2007-01-04 12:12 am (UTC)I might not be able to maintain a daily schedule for chapter three, but I'll keep things moving along as fast as I can!
All best!
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Date: 2007-01-03 07:34 pm (UTC)no subject
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Date: 2007-01-03 09:02 pm (UTC)Dr. Phil
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Date: 2007-01-03 09:28 pm (UTC)Carry on. Nothing to see here.
Dr. Phil
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Date: 2007-01-04 01:22 am (UTC)And we thought she was such a proper little girl. She must be spending too much time in that "other place."
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Date: 2007-01-04 02:51 am (UTC)