Yes! Panel three is an excellent lesson in drama without a word. You've left a ton of space between the characters (even paring down father to a 1/3 profile) but the space is perfect, it graphically represents the pause, the moment of decision in father's heart to hold the truth (the clenched hand) or to reveal the truth (the hand opens in the next panel; and it is a hard truth so the hand also comforts) Drawn with talent and heart, thank you.
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Date: 2007-10-16 02:36 pm (UTC)